Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Writing Rhymes

Use the rhymes on page 74 of your practicebook and  write a poem about the following pictures.
Due date:    21st of March

tree
night
shed

moon


22 comments:

  1. At night
    I am fright
    with not light.


    David D.

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  2. I see the moon
    in the short days of June.
    I'm in the shed
    that is it red.
    I not see the night
    is there not light.
    I buy a tree
    beacouse is free.

    BY Alba.F

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  3. Helo Katherin I do that of the rims and it is not dificult.




    David.D

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  4. TREE

    I think that a tree is like me ,
    because it has life and need to drink.
    I think that a tree is like me ,
    because it has life and need to eat.
    NIGHT
    Some nights are white,
    like the moon shines;
    Some nights are dark ,
    like the pretty stars.
    SHED
    A shed is a skin ,
    that protect me.
    A shed is a skin ,
    that covers when i sleep.
    MOON
    The moon is a rule,
    that i use in my school.
    The moon is a balloon,
    that we use in june.
    By Paula.M

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  5. MOON
    The moon
    is like a balloon
    that rimes with june
    and with rule.

    TREE

    A tree is like me
    because can drink and eat
    and it is free.

    NIGHT
    The night is white
    like mice
    and sometimes is
    like the light.

    SHED
    A shed is like a bed
    and it is red
    also what can I said?

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  6. The moon in June
    is a balloon.

    In that tree
    there are some bees
    and they look like me.

    In my shed
    I am sleeping in my bed
    and I said
    this bed is good to stay in my shed.

    This night is so bright
    I need many light
    because I can see in the night.

    BY:Alba Bernardo

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  7. I like to do this because I love internet.

    BY:Alba Bernardo

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  8. Of Jorge and Alberto.

    tree with free.
    night with might.
    shed with bed.
    and moon with zoom.

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  9. I am Alberto.
    the blog is very funny.

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  10. Hello Katherine,we are Clara and Claudia.V.
    Tree:
    He see a tree
    in the sea.

    Night:
    I like the night
    when the moon is bright.

    Shed:
    The shed is red
    like a bed.

    Moon:
    The moon is round
    like a ballon.

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  11. There is a bee in the tree.

    I have a bed in the shed.

    Flilling in the ballon I see the moon.

    In the night I don´t see the light.

    A kiss for you.By:María.

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  12. Jorge and Alberto. You have to write sentences with the rhyming words, not just two words that rhyme,

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  13. I have a tree
    that is called like me
    We like the night
    Beacouse it doesn´t give us fright
    In my shed
    I have a purple bed
    The moon
    is like a big white ballom

    BY SERGIO

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  14. MOON
    The moon in nights of june
    is like a big white ballon.

    TREE
    Near the old tree
    there is a little bee
    flying happy and free.

    SHED
    My mother was in the shed
    when she said
    Gabriel, its time to go to bed!

    NIGHT
    I have fright in the night,
    I am glad with the morning light.

    BY GABRIEL

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  15. Katherine, I corrected the rims ,here they came:
    NIGHT:
    I don't like the night
    becouse it's no light.

    TREE:
    I am free becouse
    I'm been under a tree.

    MOON:
    I will like take the moon
    with a spoon.

    SHED:
    I said that a shed
    have to be red.



    David D.

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  16. TREE
    In summer I can see
    a bee fliying in that tree.

    NIGHT
    In the night
    I am fright.

    SHED
    In my shed
    I have a bed.

    MOON
    I like the moon
    when is June.

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  17. MOON
    The moon is full
    When I throw a ballon

    TREE
    Behind the tree
    I can see a bee

    NIGHT
    By the night
    I see the light

    SHED
    In the shed
    I sleep in one red bed


    Javier Martinez

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  18. I saw the moon
    in june
    I saw a shed
    and it was red
    I fight
    when is night
    I have three trees
    and everyone is free

    BY MARIO GARCÍA

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  19. mario garcia 4º bMarch 22, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    I saw a shed
    and it was red
    a boy was free
    because he was under a tree
    the moon in june
    is like a ballon
    we fight when is night

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  20. I paints my shed.
    I will paints my bedroom.

    I can see the stars at night.
    The moon is light at night.

    In front of my houseare tere´s a big tree.
    In this tree are many bees.

    In June the moon 3 a ballom.
    At night the moon light.
    PAULA LÓPEZ

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  21. I think the moon
    it's like a spoon.
    I see the shed
    in my bed.
    In the night
    I saw might.
    In this tree
    there's a bee.
    BY:Elena

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  22. This was posted in another activity
    Katherine


    tree:
    the trees are green
    and some drink tea
    some are she or he.

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