Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Writing Activity Unit 8 - More lCorrections

16.Hello katherine my animal is going to be the tiger it lives in herds and in the jungle .They eat meat of other animals. They look like a wild cat . It is a mammal
,viviparous and carnivore.
The bengal tiger is in danger of extincion
beacause
it has a very pretty fur
by sergio


17. Hello katherine my animal is going to be a lion
the lion live
s in herds.  They eat meat of other animals. It is carnivore and mammal and lives in the savanna

by elena

18. The vole is like a mouse.
But has a short tail.
They are a animals that acompany people.They are  mammals  and  very beautiful.

By Lorena


7. LIONS

The lions are mammals and felidae. They exist in Africa and Asia, normally in savanna. They live in herds. They are carnivorous an eat what they hunt. They are big animals. The males have a lock that separates them from the famales.
They are of brown clear color.

CLARA

Very good job!

8. SEALS
The seals are mammals. They live in the sea.The seals eat fish and live 35-40 years. Seals are gray but when they are puppies are white. Seals have two fins and very smooth skin. They are very good swimmers.
Bye-Bye :)Eva

Great!

9. The monkey
The monkey
s
are like the humans.
He has the body coverd with hair.
They live in various continent
s.
Very different species exist. The young live in trees,others live in caves on mountain.They are hervivores but others carnivores.
By:Ruth

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