Rhyming Words Corrections

4º A

1. He sees a tree
   in the sea.
   I like the night
   when the moon is bright.
   The shed is red
   like a bed.
   The round moon is
   like a ballon.

Clara y Claudia V

2. There is a bee in the tree.
   
   I have a bed in the shed.
   
   Blowing the ballon I saw the moon.
   
   In the night I don´t see the light.

Maria

4ºB

1. I don't like the night
   because there is  no light.
   I  fell free when
   I  sit under a tree.
   I will like to take the moon 
   with a spoon. 
   I said that a shed
   has to be red.

David D.

2,  I think that a tree is like me ,
 Some nights are white,
A shed is a skin ,
that protect me.
A shed is a skin ,
that covers when i sleep.
The moon is a balloon,
that we use in June

Do not rhyme

Paula M.

2. The moon 
   is like a balloon 

A tree is like me
because it can drink and eat
and  is free.
The night is white
like mice
and sometimes is 
like the light.
A shed has a bed 

which is red
also what can I say?

Cynthia

3. The moon in June 
   is like a balloon.
   
   In that tree 
   there are some bees
   and they look like me.
   
   In my shed
   I am sleeping in my bed
   and I said
   this bed is good to stay in my shed.
   
   This night is so bright
   I need many lights
   because I can´t see at night

               

Alba B.

4. I have a tree
   that is called like me 
   We like the night 
   Beacause it doesn´t give us fright
   In my shed 
   I have a purple bed 
   The moon 
   is like a big white ballon

Sergio

5. The moon in the nights of June 
   is like a big white balloon.
   Near the old tree
   there is a little bee 
   flying happy and free.
   
    My mother was in the shed
   when she said
   Gabriel, its time to go to bed!
   I have fright at night and
   I am glad with the morning light.

Gabriel

6. In summer I can see
   a bee fliying in that tree.
   In the night
   I am fright.
   In my shed
   I have a bed.

 I like the moon
when it is June.

Carlos

7. The moon is full 
   When I throw a balloon
   Behind the tree
   I can see a bee
   By the night 
   I see the light
   In the shed
   I sleep in one red bed
   
   Javier M

8. I saw a shed 
   and it was red
   a boy was free 
   because he was under a tree
   the moon in June
   is like a ballon
   we fight when  it is night
   BY MARIO 

9. I paint my shed.
   I will paints my bedroom.
   
   I can see the stars at night.
   The moon is light at night.
   
   In front of my houseare there´s a big tree.
   In this tree are many bees.
   
   In June the moon 3 a ballom.
   At night the moon has light.
   PAULA L

Confusing and do not rhyme

I think the moon
it's like a spoon.
I see the shed 
from  my bed. 
In the night
I saw light.
In this tree
there's a bee.
BY:Elena